Damn, finally a really good one. We can see here the beauty of "hidden sex" lads, voyeurism is even better but who am I to judge this beuatiful piece of work? 5 stars out of 5.
I have to say that this one is really good, the only problem here is when monkey man says to the mc that he lost his virginity with the girl and then we see what happens, 1st problem, it was too fast, the author should have taken more time, like in the previous work. 2nd problem, it would have been better to see first the scenes between monkey man and the girl and then it ends with monkey man saying to the mc that he lost his virginity, really a great finale would have been. For everything else there's not much to say, a really good one, even the NTR unfortunally is not really that, the mc doesn't really like the girl (like come on, your love asks you if you want a picture of her and you say to her "You got no shame"?, that's the proof that he's not really into her, not that much and the finale is just wrong or at least logically talking stupid). Though I really appreciate this author, discovered him thanks to his previous work, 5 out 5 stars.
This romantic thing is shit. More rape please, more vore, more guro, more blackmail, more ugly bastard, more mind control, more mind break, more ntr exc exc, give us some good things.
Now for some reasons she's kinda hypnotized even though she's no more at the toilet with Yamori, like what? How's that possible? Did the rules of the spell changed?
This one is really great but at the end why make them remember nothing of what happened? You know at least you could have do something to them so that everytime you have sex with them they start liking you more, but like that you make no relationship experience with them so they'll never like you and you'll never have the chance to marry them, during sex they may "love" you but after they came out of the bathroom? It's pointless.
"To be continued", than you author were too fast while making the 1st part, everything happened so fast that it's hard to understand what really the guy wants to do and why all that happened.
People say that this girl doesn't deserve it, then let a bitch kill your son or your daughter like that, look at her face at page 25, there was no rimorse in hitting the child, and then I'll have no rimorse torturing you, that piece of shit deserved to die, raping her it's just losing time, why are you even doing that? It's not gonna bring back your child but for sure killing that bitch after what she did to your own child is gonna relief you for the rest of your life. She didn't give a damn about the life of that child, she only cared about her stupid date with her boyfriend, how can people be this soft with those kind of people? You really can forgive someone for killing your child like that? Like seriously? You just don't give a damn about your child then.
>>1093122 @ The_Black_hole True, it was good but at the end she didn't realize it was her uncle and that's the thing that, at least for me, was the wrong choice made by the author.
>>1078308 @ Anonymous You're really expecting logic in doujinshi? Come on man you can't be this serious, I know sometimes they are really dumb but this one at least is pretty acceptable.
1st problem, it was too fast, the author should have taken more time, like in the previous work.
2nd problem, it would have been better to see first the scenes between monkey man and the girl and then it ends with monkey man saying to the mc that he lost his virginity, really a great finale would have been.
For everything else there's not much to say, a really good one, even the NTR unfortunally is not really that, the mc doesn't really like the girl (like come on, your love asks you if you want a picture of her and you say to her "You got no shame"?, that's the proof that he's not really into her, not that much and the finale is just wrong or at least logically talking stupid). Though I really appreciate this author, discovered him thanks to his previous work, 5 out 5 stars.
She didn't give a damn about the life of that child, she only cared about her stupid date with her boyfriend, how can people be this soft with those kind of people? You really can forgive someone for killing your child like that? Like seriously? You just don't give a damn about your child then.
True, it was good but at the end she didn't realize it was her uncle and that's the thing that, at least for me, was the wrong choice made by the author.
You're really expecting logic in doujinshi? Come on man you can't be this serious, I know sometimes they are really dumb but this one at least is pretty acceptable.