I liked this one. In combination with the first part this actually presents some semblance of proper plot with minor comedy relief at the beginning. Still not as good as two little gems I found here years ago, but much better than most anyway. 5/5.
>>1077417 @ Chaosmastermind Well... the time stop being used by the female for once is a neat twist on the usual plotline, no matter how useless in comparison to the character's beauty/sexiness.
This one is good as a lullaby: short, concise, rather compelling (compared to other things one could find here, at least) and of splendid visual quality... a good ending as well. Me likey. XD
>>49343 @ Anonymous To be honest everyone in Nazarick IS, to a varying degree, an insane, bat-shit crazy mini-boss character with all of them having an alignment ranging from Lawful Evil (Sebas and Cocyutus) through Neutral Evil (that shapeshifter guy, Mare, Aura) or Chaotic Evil (Shalltear, Neuronista, Lupisregina Beta - not sure about her name,but I mean the redhead Pleiades). I am honestly not sure where on this scale Albedo actually lies, as at times she demonstrates a clearly insane, chaotic behaviour while most of the time remaining lawful... As for Ainz himself... During the course of the novel at least he seems to be slowly degrading from a Lawful Neutral, to Lawful Evil, to Neutral Evil... and at the point where I paused for now it is clear that his path will undoubtedly lead him to fall all the way to Chaotic Evil...
>>45774 @ Chaosmastermind How the fuck is he good-looking? He's just muscular as hell and that's it - ANYONE can get muscles if they train in their spare time... It might take quite some time and effort to get as chiselled as this guy but it should be possible as his physique is still more believable then let's say Hanma Yujiro's from Grappler Baki series or Toriko's from the Toriko series.
The greatest pleasure to find here is whenever We stumble across a rare pearl like this one, containing a plot which is actually interesting and fulfilling. It is so good to see the typical "evil bastard" getting literally broken, body and mind alike... Soooo damn refreshing... so elating... so... marvellousss...
If there is anything lackin, then it would be the story of the girl afterwards... It would be most interesting to see the MC searching for her, helping her arrange for an abortion and then trying his best in order to mend her broken soul and making her as happy as possible in order to repent for his inability to come to her aid when she needed him most desperately...
It would also be quite fascinating to witness the concoction of boundless guilt and bottomless fury slowly, but surely corroding the MC from whintin, no matter how much he tries his best to make Eri happy... Succumbing to his blazing fury and inability to let go of his regret, slowlu pushing his mind into the embrace of insanity... Causing him to begin leading a second life... During the day a hardworking employee of a medium-sized company, a loving husband of Eri and a doting father of their adorable twin children... Transforming at night into the very definition of a demon, haunting dark, narrow alleys... looking for prey... the tsunami of his bloodlust and wrath aimed precisely at lowlives, thugs and rapists... Yesss... It would be quite an interesting turn of events...
From a psychological point of view the terrified expressions on their faces are well-grounded. The characters are well aware of the fact that their lustful craving for their siblings is not only frowned upon by society but also abnormal from biological point of view. Personally I regard their facial expressions extremely well-made - after all they depict the chaotic mixture of their turbulent emotions: carnal excitement of seeing the one they crave naked and aroused, hope that the opportunity tossed at their feet would give them something more as well as fear and anxiety originating at the thought of being rejected and hated by their beloved as well as guilt induced by the moral norms ingrained into them by the society they grew up in... The one part I found lacking was their exaggereted motions, especially the females' breasts - it was a bit disturbing to see them move in ways that implied the females posessed much more power than their feeble frames should be capable of exerting while bearing absolutely no non-human traits which could be used as an excuse to explain that. The stories depicted and the occasional humour were quite engaging, though not really top of the line and the first one was plain absurd. Still, regardless of the little flaws this was a pleasant read, even after finishing the deed twice. I think this one deserves 4,80 stars... since there is no such precise rating possibility I gave it whole 5.
I can't seem to understand the reason as to why, however I feel greatly satisfied with this manga/hentai/comic/more closesly unidentified piece of art(pick whichever you find appropriate)... Curious
Art was very good... But I hated the story - too life-like... Too real... this was supposed to be a reprieve from the grief-filled, grey and generally pointless reality... Yet it ended up being so depressing... (T_T)
Well... the time stop being used by the female for once is a neat twist on the usual plotline, no matter how useless in comparison to the character's beauty/sexiness.
But seriously, this one of the few hentai that have great art, compelling characters and original story. It's like the literal cream of the crop.
Awesome plot, awesome fap, awesome feel-trip. I could only ask for more chapters/volumes of this one just like with Ane naru Mono.
Damned kobolds of time-space continuum, messing with my Rails of Fapstiny...
To be honest everyone in Nazarick IS, to a varying degree, an insane, bat-shit crazy mini-boss character with all of them having an alignment ranging from Lawful Evil (Sebas and Cocyutus) through Neutral Evil (that shapeshifter guy, Mare, Aura) or Chaotic Evil (Shalltear, Neuronista, Lupisregina Beta - not sure about her name,but I mean the redhead Pleiades).
I am honestly not sure where on this scale Albedo actually lies, as at times she demonstrates a clearly insane, chaotic behaviour while most of the time remaining lawful... As for Ainz himself... During the course of the novel at least he seems to be slowly degrading from a Lawful Neutral, to Lawful Evil, to Neutral Evil... and at the point where I paused for now it is clear that his path will undoubtedly lead him to fall all the way to Chaotic Evil...
How the fuck is he good-looking? He's just muscular as hell and that's it - ANYONE can get muscles if they train in their spare time...
It might take quite some time and effort to get as chiselled as this guy but it should be possible as his physique is still more believable then let's say Hanma Yujiro's from Grappler Baki series or Toriko's from the Toriko series.
though technically it was still multi-level netorare...
If there is anything lackin, then it would be the story of the girl afterwards... It would be most interesting to see the MC searching for her, helping her arrange for an abortion and then trying his best in order to mend her broken soul and making her as happy as possible in order to repent for his inability to come to her aid when she needed him most desperately...
It would also be quite fascinating to witness the concoction of boundless guilt and bottomless fury slowly, but surely corroding the MC from whintin, no matter how much he tries his best to make Eri happy... Succumbing to his blazing fury and inability to let go of his regret, slowlu pushing his mind into the embrace of insanity... Causing him to begin leading a second life... During the day a hardworking employee of a medium-sized company, a loving husband of Eri and a doting father of their adorable twin children... Transforming at night into the very definition of a demon, haunting dark, narrow alleys... looking for prey... the tsunami of his bloodlust and wrath aimed precisely at lowlives, thugs and rapists... Yesss... It would be quite an interesting turn of events...
Yep, only futa on female
The one part I found lacking was their exaggereted motions, especially the females' breasts - it was a bit disturbing to see them move in ways that implied the females posessed much more power than their feeble frames should be capable of exerting while bearing absolutely no non-human traits which could be used as an excuse to explain that.
The stories depicted and the occasional humour were quite engaging, though not really top of the line and the first one was plain absurd.
Still, regardless of the little flaws this was a pleasant read, even after finishing the deed twice.
I think this one deserves 4,80 stars... since there is no such precise rating possibility I gave it whole 5.
Now That's an interesting way to censor a perfectly proper comment. XD